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Lake of solace by Sentigon

Before getting into the critique, I would like to point out that my format of it makes it seem harsher than I intend as I focus mainly ...

headlights in your driveway by DogeDays

I love the color combo of pink/purple/blue and will always be positively bias to these pieces. Nevertheless, after some examination of ...

Spheal Plush by SnowyGlaze

To be fair, overall excellent plush so I will limit my critique to those parts that can be improved. The form of the ears are not ident...

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Lake of solace by Sentigon
Before getting into the critique, I would like to point out that my format of it makes it seem harsher than I intend as I focus mainly on the things that, when corrected, can become a superior work.

I find the light-shadow transaction a bit unrealistic, it just goes too fast from the brightest bottom left corner to the almost pitch black upper right one. In my opinion you could have done it better in 2 scenarios: either make one corner less bright/dark for a smoother gradient transaction of the light or have the face and water lily be led by a beam of light coming from above. For me it would be a bit more natural. Additionally, I would consider to make the markings on the character's face to be similar to those of the crane's for deeper meaning.

I do want to praise your coloring of the water, it looks fantastic :)
headlights in your driveway by DogeDays
I love the color combo of pink/purple/blue and will always be positively bias to these pieces. Nevertheless, after some examination of the work I have found some things I didn't like and would like to see changed. So here's a recipe for how Cariba would make this into the perfect work. I do not mean to sound harsh, sorry.

The glow effect seems to be placed randomly and I do not understand why it is absent in other areas. Some consistency would have helped. The same can be said about the shade, as it seems to go around the whole wolf, and not as the backlight. Pick one or more sources and work from there.

I think I know what you wanted to do, but there's a long way to it. The piece is original on its own, but walking on water as a setting isn't. Technique I have already commented on and the impact is more of a overall score.

Hope it helps :) please don't hate me.
Bunnypool hat by Caribatiger
Bunnypool hat
Originally this was suppose to be a cat themed deadpool hat, but I kinda messed up the ears and it turned out to look like a bunny. Decided to keep it ^^'
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Creeper plushie by Caribatiger
Creeper plushie
Took a while, but it's finally done. The unofficial mascot of the vastly popular game, Minecraft, is here and it's made of fleece with felt details and weighted with old poker chips :D
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Spheal Plush by SnowyGlaze
To be fair, overall excellent plush so I will limit my critique to those parts that can be improved. The form of the ears are not identical, you could have used some wire to keep the shape. I also assume you didn't want the thread on the white circles to be seen. Solution: either use thicker felt and do the running stitch inbetween the layers. Not sure if I like the nose and mouth idea. If you were going for a good plush copy of a Spheal, perhaps you should consider making a filled face and sew it on.

A seperate note on the color combo, great choice :)

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3wyl Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
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Caribatiger Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016
Hello :) I will get to it as soon as I have time.
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3wyl Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Sounds great! Feel free to dip in any time. :la:
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Gitchwa Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012
Oh! Thk you :dalove:
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Caribatiger Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012
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sophatizer Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very very very VERY super duper extremely much for the wonderful and fantabulous :+fav: !!! No words can express my gratitude! :D
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Caribatiger Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2011
well those are great pics ^^ why not fav them
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sophatizer Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, you flatter me and my kitty :aww: I can't thank you enough! :)
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Caribatiger Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2011
you're a good person ^^ Pico is a beautiful (and i'm quite sure intelligent) cat
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Naruttebayo67 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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:iconcommentplz: please comment my art :(
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